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So I've recently acquired Canilunzt syllable list from @Darkmight9 (thank you!) which composes of "growls, barks, yaps," and Germanic sounding words like 'zwichs, schz, azunein, etc.'  and I'm planning to write a Canilunzt song after the melody of the Irish folksong called "Come Out ye Black and Tans".

The Lore

"Traditionally, Vulpkanin names typically follow the conventions of their spoken language. They tend to sound harsh and guttural, and many a scholar has compared them to the names found in ancient Germanic and Semitic languages." - wikipage on Vulpkanin

"The guttural language spoken and utilized by the inhabitants of Vazzend system, composed of growls, barks, yaps, and heavy utilization of ears and tail movements.Vulpkanin speak this language with ease." - wikipage on Language

And what I got from the code;image.png.a64707052e52677634d10b32076005cb.png

This gives me a conclusion that Canilunzt is a language based around canid growls, Germanic, and Semitics, so I might be using some other seemingly appropriate words in the song based on the conclusion too.

Problem?

Actually, yeah, a few.

As an English Major who is heavily into art and literature, I cannot help but try to be extremely on point and precise with lore and whatnot.

(and complicate often-looked-over non-important things like this). 

While writing the songs by combining the given syllables and some likely-to-be-a-Canilunzt-word (like ghurth, an alternative to ghzth) and utilizing German grammar (since I am learning German), I discovered good sounding words like "Schzfaronn" etc, but the thing is, I also made a translation version of the song, and that gave me a little spook for possibly defining Canilunzt word, because Schzfaronn in this case happen to translate to Spacestation, but I have no intention to change, define, or add things to the language and the lore surrounding it.

The other problem is that I have a little of idea about the "vibe" of the language, some people said it's mostly composed of rawr and growls, while I might be taking different approach and made it sound too German.

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Oh and also, another unique trait of the language is that it uses "heavy utilization of ears and tail movements." which might make the language seems weird to be added to a song or be spoke/played on.. radio? unless that doesn't really matter? 

Why the honk are you writing this short essay on the forum then?

Firstly, I'd like to thank you for finishing that part of reading, here's what I'm thinking about:

1) I'm looking for people who can give me feedbacks or recommendations on the linguistic of Canilunzt (and Neo-Russkiya later), I don't know if we have loremasters on the station or not that can clarify the language for me. But still, comment below or contact me on discord @Emilitia Ennehrt#3586 if you are willing to help! 

2) If you want to help on instrumental part, since I only play the drums and I'm very sad at guitar, I do have all the guitar chords and references ready (it can also be piano, and tell me if you need fees for those-) (this will be very later I guess because I'm not near finishing yet).

3) What do you think about stuff like this? I do a bunch of artsy stuff and I happened to be a part of ss13 now, so I'm thinking about doing those for this game too. Maybe I can do more projects like this etc.

4) Just for the sake of xenolinguistic, I love fictional languages, Vyeshal from Tooth and Tail, etc., so it'd be a fun project to do while I endlessly listen to "Come Out ye Black and Tans" and "Es ziehen die Söhne los" on loop.

In anycase, thank you for dropping by and reading this, feel free to contact me or whatever.

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- Emilitia Ennehrt

(Helka/Scarlet)

 

now I only have 6 hours left to sleep

Sorry for spelling mistakes

Edited by EmilitiaEnnehrt
Grammar check, change of wordchoice, paraphrasing, clarification
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Mountains - Message to Bears (simple melody, put it on loop) (Working on a full one)

BPM: 171

G5,B4,G5,B4,G5,B4,G5,B4,G5,B4,G5,B4,G5,B4,G5,B4

F#5,B4,F#5,B4,F#5,B4,F#5,B4,F#5,B4,F#5,B4,F#5,B4,F#5,B4

G5,B4,G5,B4,G5,B4,G5,B4,G5,B4,G5,B4,G5,B4,G5,B4

B5,B4,B5,B4,B5,B4,B5,B4,D6,B4,D6,B4,D6,B4,D6,B4

 

WIP : Caspian - Sad Heart of Mine (actually pretty uplifting)

Spoiler

 

BPM: 200

F3,C4,F4,G4, ,F4,F3,C4,F4,G4, ,F4

F3,C4,F4,G4, ,F4,F3,C4,F4,G4, ,A5

F3,C4,F4,G4, ,F4,F3,C4,F4,G4, ,F4

F3,C4,F4,G4, ,F4,F3,C4,F4,G4, ,A5

F3,C4,F4,G4, ,F4,F3,C4,F4,G4, ,F4

F3,C4,F4,G4, ,F4,F3,C4,F4,G4, ,A5

C5, ,F5,C6, ,A5,C5, ,F5,C6, ,F5

C5, ,F5,C6, ,A5,C5, ,F5,G5, ,A5

C5, ,F5,C6, ,A5,C5, ,F5,C6, ,F5

C5, ,F5,C6, ,A5,C5, ,F5,G5, ,A5

C5, ,F5,C6, ,A5,C5, ,F5,C6, ,F5

C5, ,F5,C6, ,A5,C5, ,F5,G5, ,A5

C5, ,F5,C6, ,A5,C5, ,F5,C6, ,F5

C5, ,F5,C6, ,A5,C5, ,F5,G5, ,A5

C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4

C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,E4,F4,G4, ,A4

C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4

C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,E4,F4,G4, ,A4

C4,F4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,F4,F4,G4, ,F4

C4,F4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,F4,F4,G4, ,A4

C4,F4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,F4,F4,G4, ,F4

C4,F4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,F4,F4,G4, ,A4

C3,F4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,F4,F4,G4, ,F4

A#3,F4,F4,G4, ,F4,D3,F4,F4,G4, ,A4

C3,F4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,F4,F4,G4, ,F4

A#3,F4,F4,G4, ,F4,D3,F4,F4,G4, ,A4

C3,F4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,F4,F4,G4, ,F4

A#3,F4,F4,G4, ,F4,D3,F4,F4,G4, ,A4

C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4

C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,E4,F4,G4, ,A4

C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4

C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,E4,F4,G4, ,A4

C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,E4,F4,G4, ,A4

C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,E4,F4,G4, ,A4

C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4

C4,E4,F4,G4, ,F4,C4,E4,F4,G4, ,A4

[C5,F5,C6,C5, ,A5,C5,F5,C6,C5, ,F5

A#4,F5,G5,A#4, ,F5,A4,F5,G5,A4, ,A5

C5,F5,C6,C5, ,A5,C5,F5,C6,C5, ,F5

A#4,F5,G5,A#4, ,F5,A4,F5,G5,A4, ,A5] - Blegh, awful, too bad

 

 

I have no idea how to really make them sound good or make their rhythm sync up as close as the real music, trying to work with only ears and original songs.

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Posted (edited)

The Dog Wrestler Waltz

Original: Exurb1a

Arrangement:  Emilitia Ennehrt

Here's how it sounds in space (bluespace lag as usual)

How it's supposed to sound

Wanna play it on ss13 instrument?

The Dog Wrestler's Waltz.txt

240 BPM is awesome also

 

This would not be possible without @BlackDog's help, thanks a lot, more is coming since I'm enjoying doing these.

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