Origin story of the first Cyberiad Unathi

[thebeoni]

 

Even though i only dabble english writing i wanted to try to write origin story of my first Para Character Jas'Tijrs ( īastiīrs)

This is his origin story matching the employee record and my own thoughts of the story. Maybe this is snowlakey but this is how i am going to entertain and try to improve my english.

 

It was the year 2533 the first of Eiskiis (june).

 

Huge unathi siting at the table with a flask of cheap sol import whiskey. In the backround unathi women cleaning and two unathi hatchlings playfuly fighting. The man empties the bottle down his throat and looks into distance.

 

Women stops cleaning "Sasjir You promised the kids you will take them on hunt".

 

Man growls angrily "Bring me another bottle".

 

" You had enough!" She mutters.

 

Man slowly stands up into his full hight and it seems that his body is filling the whole room.

 

" I said BRING me another bottle!" man repeats loudly.

 

She backs up and mutters "No".

 

Man walks closer "What did you say women?"

 

She straightens but she is most certainly far smaller than the man, she looks into his yellow eyes " I said NO!"

 

He grabs her by the neck and lifts her into the air. He roars and throws her into the wall with so strong impact that the wall cracks.

 

He lstares with crazed look in his eyes and roars loudly " How dare you opose my commands i am the chief of this tribe NO ONE dares to oposse me" men suddenly feels impact on his leg and blood gushing out of it. He looks down and sees one of his hatchlings biten into his leg he grabs the green hatchling by the head and throws him at the door smashing the door with the impact and boy flying outside of the house.

 

He starts walking slowly into the direction of the unconcious women and when he is only a meter away the other hatchling stands in his way. The hatchling growls and roars with its weak voice. The unathi man kicks the hatchling away with little to no effort. He grabs the women and smashes her onto ground multiple times.

 

In meantime few tribeman heard what is happening and gathered in front of the house with all kinds of weapons they could gather and trying to make out if someone is atacking the chief and when they seen one of the children fly out the front door they decided to step in. As the group went in they seen the tribe chief smashing his wife onto ground.

 

Tribe chief looked behind himself and seen few of his man running inside. The men tried to grab and stop him but he mannaged to grab a spear from nearby wall piercing the closest unathis neck....

 

To be continued.